Grade 10 • Unit 9.5: Extension & Enrichment (Optional) • Lesson 13 of 27 • 2 Days

Peer Critique & Revision Sprint

🗓️ Before Class: Teacher Prep

🖥️ Slide Deck (project or share with students)

Short, on-the-board pacing slides for today's Do Now, agenda, vocabulary, and exit ticket -- the full detail lives in the handout above, not here.

🧑‍🏫 Substitute Teacher Guide

A scripted, step-by-step runsheet for today's class -- hand this to anyone covering the room who doesn't know the daily routine.

🎯 Essential Question

📈 Learning Objectives

By the end of this lesson (2 Days), students will be able to:

  1. Give structured, specific feedback on 2 classmates' projects using the class rubric.
  2. Select one of their own earlier projects to revise based on feedback received.
  3. Complete a meaningful revision addressing at least 2 pieces of feedback.

📐 Standards Alignment

CDOS (Career Development & Occupational Studies)

📚 Key Vocabulary

Structured Feedback
Feedback organized around specific criteria (like a rubric) rather than general impressions.

🧰 Materials & Tools

🧠 Do Now (Warm-Up)

Think of feedback you've gotten before that actually helped you improve something. What made it useful?

📋 Main Workshop / Lesson Sequence

This lesson spans 2 Days. Suggested pacing:

DayFocusPlan
Day 1Peer Critique RotationDo Now (5 min, above). Mini-lesson (8 min): review structured critique vocabulary and sentence starters. Peer critique rotation (27 min): critique 2 classmates' projects (pin, business card, or ink portrait) using the class rubric. Share (5 min).
Day 2Revision SprintDo Now (5 min): pick which project you're revising and why. Independent revision (35 min): revise one project based on feedback received, addressing at least 2 specific notes. Share (5 min).

✅ Assessment & Exit Ticket

Revised project scored with a rubric: at least 2 specific pieces of feedback visibly addressed.

Exit Ticket: What is one piece of feedback that changed your project the most?

📊 Pull up the anonymous Class Check-In for students to fill out before they go.

🧩 Differentiation & Accommodations

English Language Learners: provide translated or bilingual glossaries, visuals, and sentence frames; pair with a peer for meaningful participation. Students with IEPs: provide extended time, step-by-step checklists, and one-on-one or small-group support as specified in each student's plan. Attention-related needs: break the task into smaller steps, use visual timers, and minimize distractions. Students who finish early: extend the task by adding a second design variation, mentoring a classmate, or writing a short reflection connecting today's skill to a career pathway.

🔗 Resources & References